lespringatomic's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Summertime]

beautiful.

there's only one thing that doesn't work in the drawing:

her bikini is not the same length on her right and left hips.
oh and the position of her left and right foot is weird. The left one
should be over the right one from this angle (technically its possible,
but it looks weird on a drawing)

anyway great art!

[Tankmen]

awesome!

great drawing!

one thing: the left hand of the tankmen has an impossible pose.

the thumb should be on the side of the barrel.

[Guardian Gundam RX-250]

great, but...

Its a good job, but you should work on the arms and hands. make them bigger, larger to fit the legs and the armor plate. the chest should also be round and larger.
work on the weapon, too. We love BIG AWESOME HUGE blades.

I guess that's it.

Sanchez150894 responds:

finally someone who gives a usefull review with lots of honest suggestions!
I realized that the arms and hands were too small after I finished it... it's left arm was even smaller than it is now, I only added a lil' bit of size to 'em, so it's proportions would fit to the body without armor plates. and I guess that i'll make the scythe's blade about double sized now XD
thx for the review! ^^